Dark Path Ranger looks a bit too over designed. I don't know. Must be the Dragon Hood that actually looks like a Fish. I bet she would look better with a normal Hood. If the Dragon Design was necessary I say; make it like something painted on the Hood; not literally a "Dragon Hood".
Overall; I love the colors and shading. You are truly good at this. The design thing must be the fault of your employers.
thank you, actually i design all of this myself, the hood serves it purpose, it gives the design more character, draws your eyes, and this is an evolved version so normal hood is a no no (i already got another character wearing that)